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Example first draft: a footpath quote

This is what bid help produces after the go/no-go check. The tender is real: Swanley Town Council wants two park footpaths rebuilt (about £20,000, quotes by 30 November 2026). The firm is invented. Every [square bracket] is something only the firm can fill in, and that's deliberate: a draft should never make up your experience or your prices.

Why this draft looks the way it does: the council didn't publish scoring or a question list. It asked for a quote, and it asked contractors to help it choose between self-binding gravel, tarmac and block paving on durability, accessibility, maintenance and whole-life cost. Most quotes will be a price and a paragraph. A short, clear options comparison is the easiest way to stand out, so the draft leads with it.

The draft

Subject: Quotation: Swanley Park footpath refurbishment

Dear Mr Hayman,

Thank you for the opportunity to quote for the refurbishment of the two footpaths in Swanley Park. Our quotation, method and a comparison of the three surfacing options you are considering are below.

1. What we will do

Footpath One (approx. 355.4 m, finished width 2.5 m excluding edging, suitable for occasional vehicle access)

Footpath Two (extend from approx. 29 m to 62.3 m, finished width 2 m excluding edging, pedestrian use): as above, with a [100-150] mm pedestrian sub-base.

Both paths: a cross-fall of about 1 in 40 to shed water, and gradients kept within accessible limits wherever the ground allows.

2. Surfacing options compared

Self-binding gravelTarmacBlock paving
Price, both paths£[ ]£[ ]£[ ]
Vehicle use (Path One)Fair, can rut under heavy or wet useGoodGood on a vehicle base
AccessibilityGood when well compacted, softer when wetVery good, smoothVery good if laid level
MaintenanceRake and top up every [1-2] yearsLow: sealing and patchingLow: re-sand joints, weeds
Expected life[10-15] years[20-25] years[25+] years
Look in a parkNaturalUrbanFormal
Whole-life cost, 20 yearsLowest to install, rises with upkeepMiddleHighest to install, lowest upkeep

Our recommendation: [tarmac for Path One, because of the vehicle access, and self-binding gravel for Path Two to keep a natural look at lower cost]. We are happy to price any combination.

3. Programme

[n] working days on site within the contract period (18 January to 12 February 2027), Path Two first so the park keeps one route open. Work stops in heavy rain, and we allow [n] contingency days.

4. Keeping the park safe

Heras fencing around each work area, signed diversions, a banksman for every vehicle movement, and the site left secure and swept each evening. We will agree access and storage areas with Mr Brooker before starting, and supply a risk assessment and method statement before work begins.

5. About us

[Company name] is a [town]-based groundworks contractor. Recent similar work: [footpath or surfacing job, client, year, value]. [Public liability cover £x million.] [Accreditations, e.g. CHAS.]

6. Price

[Option you recommend]: £[ ] excluding VAT. Other options as in section 2. The price is fixed for [90] days and includes disposal, edging, reinstatement and welfare. It excludes [anything you exclude, e.g. diverting buried services].

We would welcome a site visit before the deadline to confirm sub-base depths and drainage.

Yours sincerely,
[Name, role, phone]

What the firm still has to do

How bid help works

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An independent example, not connected to Swanley Town Council or any contractor. Figures in brackets are placeholders, not advice on price or specification. Check the tender documents and get your own technical advice for site conditions.